Totally Covered
Dropped at 20%.Somehow the pacing just felt off, but my real problem was with the multitude of editing errors granting on my nerves and disrupting the flow. It really takes away from a story, even a good one, when you have to reread a sentence (sometimes multiple times) because the error is so very glaring.
Besides that the story seemed good and had potential, along with intriguing characters and a healthy and established relationship, but that just doesn't feel like enough for me to continue.
